So nice. The way you interpreted the song makes so much sense; I'd have never thought of applying it to Charlie and his students, but it's perfect. Also, some of your imagery evokes the lyricism of the song beautifully. The voices are all good; even when there are no dialogue tags I can tell who's speaking, and the relationships ring right for the time period, too. Thank you! This is a treat. :)
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Date: 2007-03-17 08:52 am (UTC)